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    Gordon Aniline

    PuddingDaddy
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    Post by PuddingDaddy Sun Nov 11, 2018 3:10 pm

    Account Name: PuddingDaddy

    Basic Info

    Name: Gordon Aniline
    Nickname: Mock
    Age: 23
    Gender: Male
    Race: Human
    Affiliation: Pirate
    Bounty: 0
    Achievements: N/A
    Profession: Marksman: The profession of Marksman provides sound experience and insight in calculating range, distance and wind elements and their impact on the path of a projectile. It is a general trait that applies to guns, slingshots, cannons, rifles and the like. People without this profession will have little to no luck in firing cannonballs where they are supposed to go under normal battle conditions. Characters with this profession have access to certain additional traits and their range techniques will have the effect costs of the tier below with short range being free.

    Thief: The Thief is a job closely related to the assassin. They both provide stealth capabilities, though a Thief gains lockpicking skills instead of poison knowledge, can generally know their way around the ways of barter and trade, and pickpocketing. Thieves don't have it hard to find 'underground info' in most cities, either.

    Position: Captain
    Crew: Mock Pirates


    Appearance

    Height: 6'2"
    Weight: 165 lbs
    Hair: Medium length, messy, silver hair. Wavy and covers a good portion of his face.
    Eyes: Narrow eyes with purple pupils
    Clothing/Accessories: Gordon wears a black cloak that covers his jaw down to his knees. Beneath he wears skin tight black clothes with leather combat boots. He wears a black beanie hat.
    General Appearance: Gordon has smooth, pale skin that's almost ghost like. Gordon is rather thin for his size, but his muscles are toned and defined. Gordon doesn't have an imposing figure, and tends to go unnoticed by many. For those that pay close enough attention his face is calming and soft. Gordon stands tall and firm at all times, and keeps a watchful eye on his surroundings. He always keeps one hand near his gun in the even that he needs to defend himself in a moments notice. Gordon's eyes are deep set with purplish black bags beneath them causing his eyes to have a seemingly ethereal glow to them as they cut through his angled face.

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    Background

    Personality: Gordon is a quiet man who prefers to go largely unnoticed by those arround him. His sense of Justice is quite strong, and those who go against it will be punished by him. Gordon believes that the World Government is but a mere husk of what it once was, a mock up if you will, and as such has made it his mission to right the wrongs of the World Government.

    Gordon does not anger easily, and will generally only get angery if someone goes so far past what he deems as unacceptable behavior that he cannot possibly forgive them for it. When he is angry however it's a calm and cold anger that simmers beneath the surface. It does not get in his way and serves to only fuel him even more without getting reckless. Gordon's biggest fear is that he will die without leaving a mark on society and that he'll leave it worse than better.

    Gordon is skeptical by nature and slow to trust anyone new. Anyone new that he meets he will instantly try to calculate a way to destroy them in the event that they betray him. If you do gain his trust however he would die to protect you.

    Hometown: Illusia, West Blue
    History:
    History:

    Inventory and Abilities

    Combat: Gordon fights at a comfortable distance from his opponent with carefully calculated shots. Gordon is meticulous and cautious when he fights, which has allowed him to survive. The training he underwent in both the Marines and Mock has caused him to become a lethal shot. His powerful sense of justice makes him willing to risk everything in a fight as well, willing to do whatever he must to right what he views as wrong.
    Weaponry: Iron Flintlock Revolver: 6.25 inch octagonal barrel, 4 chamber cylinder, total of 13 inches long, 4 inches tall
    30 rounds
    Revolver:
    Items: Leather Bag, Toy Making Tools, Sewing Kit, Thread, Cotton Stuffing, Doll Of Sylvia, First Aid Kit, Gun Maintance Kit, Pen and Paper
    Beli: 350,000
    SD Earned: 30
    Stat Points: 62 (32+30)
    Advancement Points:
    SD Remaining: 0
    Stats:

    1. Used for Stats: 62
    2. Used for Fortune: 0


    • Strength: 15
    • Speed: 17
    • Stamina: 10
    • Accuracy: 29 (20 + 9)
    • Fortune: 15


    Traits: Fate of the Cunning (3 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your accuracy stat.

    Profession Traits: Treasure Hunter (1 Trait) – With their knack for discovering hidden items that don’t necessarily belong to them, these thieves are very skilled in looking for treasures. Thus, in their SLs, they will always get an extra little item. It could be something quirky, or it could be something rare.

    Devil Fruit wrote:Devil Fruit Name: N/A
    Devil Fruit Type: N/A
    Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


    Techniques

    Regular Technique Points: 30
    Used Regular Technique Points: 4
    Special Technique Points: N/A
    Used Special Technique Points: N/A

    Heart Shot (4)
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Power: 4
    Stats: N/A
    Description: Mock carefully lines up his shot to his targets heart, fires, and attempts to shoot his target in the heart.

    Development History

    Gains/Losses:
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    Last edited by PuddingDaddy on Tue Nov 27, 2018 8:56 pm; edited 3 times in total
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    Post by Tenken Mon Nov 19, 2018 6:05 pm

    Alrighty take a gander at your profile!


    • You'll need to add 2-3 more sentences of appearance, describing his face mostly since right now the description is just for his body overall and pictures don't always work.

    • Your personality needs another 4-5 sentences overall, it's just a little barebones for the moment. Maybe add some things such as what makes him trust others, what makes him angry, what are his general likes and dislikes, as well as fears/goals or the like.

    • You will need to give dimensions for your revolver, as well as list the amount of ammunition you have.

    • Under your techniques you will need to add a 4 next to "Used Technique Points" as you have used 4 of them for your technique. Please also give a little more detail because right now that is extremely underexplained - does he simply aim and shoot? Does he crouch down and line up his target? Is it a rapid shot in that general area of the chest?
    PuddingDaddy
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    Post by PuddingDaddy Mon Nov 26, 2018 1:32 pm

    Fixed
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    Post by Acrean Tue Nov 27, 2018 3:06 pm

    Well most of this looks good. But let's talk about the inability to feel pain.

    This needs to be a trait, and we have the Funky Body trait for just such a purpose. I get that you want to balance it around the idea that not feeling pain has drawbacks, but it also has some pretty significant perks, and it's such a far cry from the norm that if you really want this for your character, you're going to need to invest a trait in it.
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    Post by PuddingDaddy Tue Nov 27, 2018 8:58 pm

    Took it out, but I will say that if this matters it is a real life disorder. It's called CIPA and while it is rare it does exist. It does come with a slew of problems, but I would rather not have it and get approved faster then fight for it and get approval delayed. If this sways your decision at all then great, if not, it's fine
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    Post by Dunn Sun Dec 02, 2018 2:03 pm

    looks fine 1/2
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    Post by Acrean Sun Dec 02, 2018 7:24 pm

    Looks good to me as well. 2/2

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