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    Scorp Tavian the Pirate

    Pipper
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    Post by Pipper Sun Oct 28, 2018 8:29 pm

    Account Name: Pipper




    Basic Info




    Name: Scorp Tavian
    Nickname: None
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male
    Race: Humans
    Affiliation: Pirates
    Bounty: None
    Achievements: None
    Profession: Martial Artist
    Position: Captain
    Crew: Pink Star Pirates




    Appearance




    Height: 5'6
    Weight: 130 Lb
    Hair: Black, Spiky, Pointed upwards at a slanted angle
    Eyes: Angled with yellow pupils
    Clothing/Accessories: He wears a red trench coat with a black tank top, grey baggy pants, and bright red boots. he has a blade at his side at all times, though its mostly just there for decoration As its sides are all blunted.
    General Appearance: Scorp is a dude of average height, with a mysterious, laid-back expression on his face most of the time. He has a muscular build and yellow, slanted eyes with hair that points all over the place, as well as large rounded ears. An almost constant shadow is cast over his eyes at all times for some strange reason. He wears white gloves as well when not in combat. Weirdly, he was born with a strange pink mark on his chest resembling the shape of a star. He used this as a basis for his newly founded crew's name.

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    Background




    Personality: Scorp is a laid back, chill dude with nothing better to do than to sail the seven seas, causing a ruckus wherever the wind takes him. He doesn't get stressed easily, and can usually break down any situation he's in relatively calmly. Though, when he does get mad he can become a little bit brutal, going out of his way to be excessive with the damage he can do. He can be very blunt, which can get him into some troubling situations. He likes to remain positive and actively seeks out the most interesting course of action in whatever he does.

    He doesn't have anyone in particular that he cares about and doesn't bond normally with people (though that could change with the addition of new members to his crew). He has no aspirations other than to travel and see what sort of weird shenanigans he can come up with along the way.


    Hometown: Loguetown, East Blue

    History: Scorp was born in a little old town named Loguetown and lived there for a majority of his life. His mother died in childbirth and his father was a marine, killed in the line of duty when Scorp was just 9 years old. He grew up an orphan and quickly learned how to fend for himself. He became a thief to survive and hid in the countless alleys of Loguetown to escape from pursuing Marines.

    In time, Scorp grew to enjoy the "thrill of the chase" and begun to seek out new ways to entertain himself. His endeavors grew larger and larger in scale with each subsequent way he found to enjoy himself until eventually, He brought the chase to the marines.

    Through his many adventures as a thief, he had acquired a weird power to glow (probably from some weird fruit he'd eaten) and he decided to see how he could use it to inspire a chase. So one dim morning, he strolled on up to a small marine galley (whose crew was off resting on the mainland) and stole it. Of course, it wasn't fun without the chase, so Scorp gave off a bright glow, waking quite a few people up and alerting them to the fact that one of their ships had drifted off. They attempted to give chase, but by then Scorp was long gone.

    It occurred to Scorp sometime later that he had just inadvertently become a pirate, and that he had actually stolen a registered marine vessel, so he decided to just embrace the title of pirate and took to refitting the ship.

    And so, the Pink Star Pirates and the pirate captain Scorp Tavian was born...





    Inventory and Abilities




    Combat: Scorp usually has a carefree attitude to combat and doesnt usually go in with a plan, he just "goes with the flow".
    Weaponry: A Useless, Blunt Blade around 3 feet in length, made out of iron.
    Items: None
    Beli: 800,000
    SD Earned: 0
    Stat Points: 0
    Advancement Points: 0
    SD Remaining: 0
    Stats: 67

    1. Used for Stats: 62
    2. Used for Fortune: 0


    • Strength: 25 (20 base + 5 from trait boosts)
    • Speed: 18
    • Stamina: 13
    • Accuracy: 11
    • Fortune: 16





    Traits:




    Random Devil Fruit (2 Traits)
    By selecting the option of receiving a Random Devil Fruit (RDF) the character automatically use up two of their general traits towards the random devil fruit they receive.

    Mighty Strength (1 Trait) - For every 4 points put into strength (up to a maximum of 150), the score increases by an additional 1.


    Profession Traits:

    Hardened Fighter (1 Trait) – Through excessive training in breaking planks, punching rocks, and all those durability-building exercises, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained flesh that is as hard as iron, making them much more resistant to physical damage.

    Devil Fruit wrote:Devil Fruit Name: Guro Guro No Mi/Glow Glow
    Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
    Devil Fruit Ability: This devil fruit grants the user the ability to make their body glow. The user can make themselves bright enough to blind lots of enemies and burn the skin; as a result, they can make the eyes and skin very sensitive for a certain time. If the user can move fast enough, they can leave ghost-like images behind to confuse the enemy.




    Techniques




    Regular Technique Points: 16
    Used Regular Technique Points: 4
    Special Technique Points: 0
    Used Special Technique Points: 0

    DEVIL FRUIT TECHNIQUES

    TECHNIQUE NAME: "I Can Glow" (free starting technique)
    Rank: None
    Type: None
    Range: None
    Power: None
    Stats: None
    Description: The user can make their body glow.


    TECHNIQUE NAME: "Sudden Flare"
    Rank: 4
    Type: Support
    Range: Short
    Power: 4
    Stats: -2 debuff to accuracy
    Description: The user can, within a certain distance of themselves flash a sudden and bright light, all around their body. They can maintain this brightness for a couple of seconds before it disappears on its own. Its meant to stop enemies in their tracks (or at the very least make it harder for the user to get hit) and open them up to counter attacks.
    *Single Target Attack





    Development History




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    Last edited by Pipper on Tue Oct 30, 2018 9:51 pm; edited 25 times in total
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    Post by Dunn Sun Oct 28, 2018 8:33 pm

    Guro Guro no Mi [Glow Glow Fruit] T6


    Last edited by Dunn on Sun Oct 28, 2018 8:35 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : adding the rolled fruit)
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    Post by Sen Sun Oct 28, 2018 8:33 pm

    The member 'Dunn' has done the following action : Dices roll


    'RDF' : 50
    Tenken
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    Post by Tenken Tue Oct 30, 2018 5:05 pm

    Hey buddy, so a few things.


    • If you could just add another sentence or two to your physical description that would help. Does he have any interesting scars? Any unique marks on his body like tattoos or the like? What about his nose/ears/mouth - are they big/small/crooked/perfect/etc.?

    • Same thing with personality, it's just a tiny bit threadbare. What does your character do when he's angry? Does he care about people? What is his dream in life and what does he do to achieve it?

    • You should mention the dimensions (length) of your blade as well as the material it is made from (in this case iron).

    • Your strength should in fact read 15 (12 + 3) since the new total is 15 after the boost of your trait, not 12.

    • You also have 16 regular technique points to use, not 12.
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    Post by Pipper Tue Oct 30, 2018 5:25 pm

    Alright, i think it should be mostly edited up by now
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    Post by Tenken Tue Oct 30, 2018 5:32 pm

    Changes discussed, much better.

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    Post by K1ngisback Tue Oct 30, 2018 8:42 pm

    For your weapon, you indicate that it is metal. Can you please specify that it is iron? If it was steel, for example, there would be a price.

    As far as your Sudden Flare technique, please change the type to Support; all buffs and debuffs fall under support type. Also, can you clarify if it is aoe or not? As it stands, it would be a short range single target debuff. If it were an aoe, the numerical debuff going forward would have a different ratio.

    Let me know when you make these changes and I'll 2/2 you.
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    Post by K1ngisback Tue Oct 30, 2018 9:20 pm

    2/2

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